In this photo there is a grandmother and all of here grandchildren. There is ten kids, however, the caption read that she only could account for six of them. The photo has the grandmother in the middle of all of these children which caught me a little off guard. i did not understand why all of these kids who don't look that far apart in age was surrounding her with a caption saying she only can account for six. plus i could not figure out why most of them look so unhappy. i think this photo has both a short and long story behind it.

Home Sweet Home

I miss being so close to the beach. back home it was all of five minutes away. its so relaxing when ever i feeled stressed i go and let the waves take away my problems.

The introduction for my paper starts off with  my hypothesis on what plays as a major influences on peoples views of the world. I am letting the reader know my opinion on the matter so that he or she can see where i am coming from in my paper. i made sure that it was broad enough for everyone to feel included in some way. My conclusion is not as broad as my introduction. i was trying to wrap up all my thoughts without restating anything. it tells the readers exactly why i picked those films and all that they have given me.

Thought my draft was good I am going to perfect it. I need to go into deep an analysis of the films I have chosen and how they affect my view on the world. I wish I had enough time to go back and watch all of the films and then write my paper after but since time is limited I am just going to go off of memory and analysis from the internet. I know in my draft I wrote very light on the situations instead of going into their true meanings of the movie and on what I thought and how I honestly felt. Going back and making these changes well not only make my paper better but it will also give the reader a better insight into the way I view the world we live in.